Dusk on autumn brown -
where does this sadness come from?
Freed leaves, dancing home..
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[some of the (too many) self-appointed authorities believe that a haiku should contain a 'surprise' element, or as the Germans say, 'the Aha! experience', plus the usual 5-7-5 syllables and season and time of day identified..]
Michael Shepherd
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/demonstration-haiku-for-mike-who-asked/
