achal agrawal - please comment!

2014-06-14 9

when someone picks a pen,
in poemhunter - the poet's den,
and writes a poetry then,
amount women and men,

people who dont understand,
comment 'you have a great hand',
'you are the next ayn rand',
'the best poem on land'

everyone gives a ten,
when the poem is not worth a yen,
it cud have been written by chinese chen,
there is nothing deep like zen.

but when someone writes somehing easy,
people seem too busy,
cognizance is treated uneasy,
you get comments like ' this must have been breezy'!

achal agrawal

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